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$BIpB<$5$s(B>
> $B::FI$NJ}$h$m$7$/$*4j$$$7$^$9!#(B

$B9%$_$NItJ,$b$"$k$N$GE,Ev$K<h<NA*Br$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(B

> 3. general copy (24$B9TL\(B)

$B$3$l!"$I$&Lu$;$P$$$$$N$+$o$+$s$J$$$G$9$M!#$H$$$&$+!"2?$r(B
$B;X$7$F$k$N$+$b$&0l$D$o$+$C$F$^$;$s!D!D(B

$B2V0f(B

--- chapter.sgml.01.org	Mon Feb 18 11:39:53 2002
+++ chapter.sgml.01	Mon Feb 18 11:53:08 2002
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
       <author>
 	<firstname>Randy</firstname>
 	<surname>Pratt</surname>
-	<contrib>Sysinstall $B$N%&%)!<%/%9%k!<(B, $B%9%/%j!<%s%7%g%C%H(B,
+	<contrib>Sysinstall $B0l<0(B, $B%9%/%j!<%s%7%g%C%H(B,
 	  $B5Z$SDL>o$N%3%T!<(B </contrib>
       </author>
     </authorgroup>
@@ -30,12 +30,12 @@
   <title>FreeBSD $B$N%$%s%9%H!<%k(B</title>
 
   <sect1>
-    <title>$B$3$N>O$G$O(B</title>
+    <title>$B35MW(B</title>
 
     <indexterm><primary>installation</primary></indexterm>
 
     <para>FreeBSD $B$G$O(B, <application>Sysinstall</application>
-      $B$H8F$P$l$k%F%-%9%H%Y!<%9$N%$%s%9%H!<%k%W%m%0%i%`$,MQ0U$5$l$F$$$^$9(B.
+      $B$H8F$P$l$k%F%-%9%H%Y!<%9$N;H$$$d$9$$%$%s%9%H!<%k%W%m%0%i%`$,MQ0U$5$l$F$$$^$9(B.
       $B$3$l$OI8=`$N%$%s%9%H!<%k%W%m%0%i%`$G$9$,(B,
       $B3F%Y%s%@!<$OFH<+$N%$%s%9%H!<%kMQ%W%m%0%i%`$rMQ0U$9$k$3$H$b$G$-$^$9(B.
       $B$3$N>O$G$O(B, FreeBSD $B$r%$%s%9%H!<%k$9$k:]$K(B
@@ -51,12 +51,12 @@
       
       <listitem>
 	<para>FreeBSD $B$,%O!<%I%G%#%9%/$r$I$N$h$&$K;2>H$9$k$+(B,
-	  $B$^$?$I$N$h$&$K:YJ,2=$9$k$+(B.</para>
+	  $B$^$?$I$N$h$&$KJ,3d$9$k$+(B.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para><application>Sysinstall</application>
-	  $B$r$I$N$h$&$K3+;O$9$k$+(B.</para>
+	  $B$r$I$N$h$&$K5/F0$9$k$+(B.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -70,17 +70,16 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>$B%$%s%9%H!<%k$7$h$&$H$9$k%P!<%8%g%s$N%5%]!<%H$5$l$F$$$k@_Dj0lMw$rFI$s$G(B,
-	  $B$"$J$?$N;H$C$F$$$k%O!<%I%&%'%"$,(B FreeBSD
-	  $B$G%5%]!<%H$5$l$F$$$k$+$I$&$+3NG'$7$F2<$5$$(B.</para>
+	<para>$B%$%s%9%H!<%k$7$h$&$H$9$k%P!<%8%g%s$N(BFreeBSD$B$KIUB0$7$F$$$k%5%]!<%H%O!<%I%&%'%"0lMw$rFI$s$G(B,
+	  $B$"$J$?$N;H$C$F$$$k%O!<%I%&%'%"$,%5%]!<%H$5$l$F$$$k$+$I$&$+3NG'$7$F2<$5$$(B.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <note>
       <para>$BDL>o(B, $B$3$l$i$N%$%s%9%H!<%k@bL@=q$O(B i386 (<quote>PC $B8_49(B</quote>) 
         $B%"!<%-%F%/%A%c$N%3%s%T%e!<%?$rBP>]$K$7$F$$$^$9(B.
-        $B@bL@=q$NCf$GB>$N%W%i%C%H%U%)!<%`(B ($BNc$($P(B Alpha)
-	$B$KE,MQ$5$l$kItJ,$K$D$$$F$OL@5-$5$l$F$$$^$9(B.</para>
+        $BB>$N%W%i%C%H%U%)!<%`(B ($BNc$($P(B Alpha)
+	$B$KFCM-$N@bL@$K$D$$$F$OL@5-$5$l$F$$$^$9(B.</para>
     </note>
 
   </sect1>
