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	$B$=$N%U%!%$%k$N%$%s%G%s%H%l%Y%k$K$O(B<emphasis>$B$h$j$^$;$s(B</emphasis>$B!#(B
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--- chapter.sgml	Sat Sep 25 00:00:45 2004
+++ chapter_ryusuke.sgml	Sat Sep 25 00:09:52 2004
@@ -43,14 +43,14 @@
 
   <variablelist>
     <varlistentry>
-      <term>$BJF9q1Q8l$NDV$j$rMQ$$$k(B</term>
+      <term>$BJF9q<0$N1Q8l$N$D$E$j$rMQ$$$k(B</term>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>$BF1$88l$KBP$7$F0[$J$kDV$j$r$9$k4v$D$+$N1Q8l$NJQ<o$,$"$j$^$9!#(B
-	  $BDV$j$,0[$J$k$H$3$m$G$O!"JF9q1Q8lHG$rMQ$$$F$/$@$5$$!#(B
+	<para>$B1Q8l$K$OF1$8C18l$KBP$7$F0[$J$k$D$E$j$r$9$kJQ<o$,$"$j$^$9!#(B
+	  $B$$$m$$$m$J$D$E$j$,$"$k>l9g$K$O!"JF9q<0$rMQ$$$F$/$@$5$$!#(B
 	  <quote>colour</quote> $B$G$O$J$/(B <quote>color</quote>$B!"(B
-	  <quote>rationalise</quote> $B$G$O$J$/(B <quote>rationalize</quote>$B!"(B
-	  $BEy$G$9!#(B</para>
+	  <quote>rationalise</quote> $B$G$O$J$/(B <quote>rationalize</quote>
+	  $B$J$I$G$9!#(B</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
@@ -211,16 +211,16 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>$B;z2<$2(B</title>
 
-      <para>$B$=$l$>$l$N%U%!%$%k$O!"(B
-	$B$=$N%U%!%$%k$r4^$`$+$b$7$l$J$$(B
-	$B%U%!%$%k$N%$%s%G%s%H%l%Y%k$K(B<emphasis>$B$+$+$o$i$:(B</emphasis>$B!"(B
-	0$B7eL\$KCV$+$l$?%$%s%G%s%H$G;O$^$j$^$9!#(B</para>
+      <para>$B$=$l$>$l$N%U%!%$%k$N%$%s%G%s%H$O(B 0 $B7eL\$+$i;O$^$j$^$9!#(B
+	$BB>$N%U%!%$%k$KFI$_9~$^$l$k>l9g$G$b!"(B
+	$B$=$N%U%!%$%k$N%$%s%G%s%H%l%Y%k$K$O(B<emphasis>$B$h$j$^$;$s(B</emphasis>$B!#(B
+      </para>
 
-      <para>$B3+$-%?%0$G$O(B2$B8DJ,$N6uGr$G;z2<$2I}$rA}$d$7!"(B
-	$BJD$8%?%0$G$O(B2$B8DJ,$N6uGr$G;z2<$2I}$r8:$i$7$^$9!#(B
-	$B9TF,$N(B8$B$D$N6uGr$N$+$?$^$j$O%?%V$XCV$-49$($k$Y$-$G$9!#(B
+      <para>$B3+;O%?%0$G$O(B 2 $B8D$N6uGr$G;z2<$2I}$rA}$d$7!"(B
+	$B=*N;%?%0$G$O(B 2 $B8D$N6uGr$G;z2<$2I}$r8:$i$7$^$9!#(B
+	$B9TF,$N(B 8 $B$D$N6uGr$N$+$?$^$j$O%?%V$XCV$-49$($i$l$k$Y$-$G$9!#(B
 	$B%?%V$NA0$K6uGr$rMQ$$$:!"9TKv$KM>J,$J6uGr$r2C$($J$$$G$/$@$5$$!#(B
-	$BMWAGFb$NCf?H$,0l9T0J>e$KEO$k$J$i$P(B2$B8DJ,$N6uGr$G;z2<$2$5$l$k$Y$-$G$9!#(B
+	$BMWAG$NCf?H$,0l9T0J>e$KEO$k$J$i$P(B 2 $B8D$N6uGr$G;z2<$2$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(B
       </para>
 
       <para>$B$?$H$($P!"$3$N%;%/%7%g%s$N%=!<%9$O$D$.$N$h$&$K$J$C$F$$$^$9!#(B</para>
@@ -251,8 +251,8 @@
 	$B3F%U%!%$%k$N:G8e$K=q$+$l$?(B <application>Emacs</application>
 	$B$N%m!<%+%kJQ?t$K$h$C$F$3$N%9%?%$%k$,0];}$5$l$^$9!#(B</para>
 
-      <para><application>Vim</application> $B%f!<%6!<$O(B
-	$B%(%G%#%?$r$3$N$h$&$K@_Dj$7$?$$$+$b$7$l$^$;$s(B:</para>
+      <para><application>Vim</application> 
+	$B%f!<%6$O0J2<$N$h$&$K%(%G%#%?$r@_Dj$9$k$HNI$$$G$7$g$&!#(B</para>
 
       <programlisting>augroup sgmledit
   autocmd FileType sgml set formatoptions=cq2l " Special formatting options
@@ -365,17 +365,18 @@
     <sect2>
       <title>$BHs2~9T6uGr(B</title>
 
-      <para>$B2~9T$O=9$/8+$($?$jJ8$rC)$j$E$i$/$9$k=j$G$OHr$1$F$/$@$5$$!#(B
-	$B2~9T$OA*Br$7$?=PNOG^BN$NI}$K0MB8$7$^$9!#(B
+      <para>$B2~9T$K$h$j=9$/$J$C$?$j!"(B
+	$BFI$_$E$i$/$J$k$h$&$J>l=j$G$O2~9T$rHr$1$F$/$@$5$$!#(B
+	$B2~9T$O;HMQ$7$F$$$k=PNOG^BN$NI}$K0MB8$7$^$9!#(B
 	$BFC$K!"(BHTML $BJ8=q$r%F%-%9%H%V%i%&%6$G1\Mw$9$k$H(B
-	$B<!$NCJMn$N$h$&$K1x$/%U%)!<%^%C%H$5$l$?CJMn$K$J$k$3$H$,$"$j$^$9(B: </para>
+	$B<!$NCJMn$N$h$&$K1x$/%U%)!<%^%C%H$5$l$k$3$H$,$"$j$^$9!#(B</para>
 
       <literallayout class="monospaced">Data capacity ranges from 40 MB to 15
 GB.  Hardware compression &hellip;</literallayout>
 
-      <para>$B0lHL<BBN(B <literal>&amp;nbsp;</literal> $B$O(B
-	$B$3$l$r64$s$@ItJ,4V$G$N2~9T$r6X;_$7$^$9!#(B
-	$BHs2~9T6uGr$O<!$N>l=j$G;HMQ$7$F$/$@$5$$(B:</para>
+      <para>$B0lHL<BBN(B <literal>&amp;nbsp;</literal> $B$O!"(B
+ 	$B$3$l$r64$`>l=j$G$N2~9T$r6X;_$7$^$9!#(B
+	$B$3$NHs2~9T6uGr$O<!$N>l=j$G;HMQ$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(B</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
@@ -389,10 +390,9 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>$BJ#?t8l$+$i@.$kL>A0$N4V(B(<quote>The FreeBSD Brazilian
-	    Portuguese Documentation Project</quote> $B$NMM$K(B
-	    3,4$B8l0J>e$NL>A0$X(B $B$3$l$rE,MQ$9$k$H$-$K$O(B
-	    $BCm0U$7$F;HMQ$7$F$/$@$5$$(B):</para>
+	  <para>$BJ#?t$NC18l$+$i@.$kL>A0$N4V(B (<quote>The FreeBSD Brazilian
+	    Portuguese Documentation Project</quote> $B$N$h$&$J(B
+	    3-4 $B8l0J>e$NL>A0$XE,MQ$9$k>l9g$K$OCm0U$7$F$/$@$5$$(B):</para>
 
 	  <programlisting><![ CDATA [Sun&nbsp;Microsystems]]></programlisting>
 	</listitem>
@@ -403,8 +403,8 @@
   <sect1 id="writing-style-word-list">
     <title>$B8l6g%j%9%H(B</title>
 
-    <para>$B<!$O(B FreeBSD $B%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s(B $B%W%m%8%'%/%H$GMQ$$$k$Y$-DV$jJ}$N(B
-      $B>.$5$J8l6g%j%9%H$G$9!#(B
+    <para>$B0J2<$O!"(BFreeBSD $B%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s%W%m%8%'%/%H$GMQ$$$i$l$k$Y$-(B
+      $B$D$E$j$r<($7$?>.$5$J8l6g%j%9%H$G$9!#(B
       $BC5$7$F$$$k8l6g$,$3$N%j%9%H$K8+$D$+$i$J$+$C$?$i!"(B
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