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From: Ryusuke Suzuki <ryusuke@nucl.sci.hokudai.ac.jp>
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Date: Sat, 02 Oct 2004 17:59:48 +0900
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Subject: [doc-jp-work 943] Re: handbook/disks 1.27 -> 1.187
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$BNkLZN42p$G$9!#(B

$BARIJ$5$s!"(Bhandbook/disks $B$N(B commit $BK\Ev$K$*$D$+$l$5$^$G$7$?!#(B

disks $B$K(B typo $B$H;W$o$l$kE@$,$"$j$^$7$?!#(B

$B$=$l$H!"L\$K$D$$$?(B
1)step $B%?%0$N%$%s%G%s%H$N=$@5!"(B2)$B6uGr$NDI2C!"(B3)$B%3%s%^$N>C5n(B
$B$b0l=o$KJs9p$5$;$FD:$-$^$9!#(B

--- chapter.sgml	Sat Oct  2 13:52:33 2004
+++ chapter_ryusuke.sgml	Sat Oct  2 17:40:37 2004
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@
 	    $B<!$K%^%9%?%V!<%H%l%3!<%I$K$D$$$FJ9$+$l$^$9!#(B
 	    $B$3$3$G$O4{$KF0$$$F$$$k%7%9%F%`$K%G%#%9%/$rDI2C$7$h$&$H$7$F$$$k$N$G(B
 	    <literal>None</literal> $B$rA*$S$^$9!#(B</para>
-	  </step>
+	</step>
 
 	<step>
 	  <title>$B%G%#%9%/%i%Y%k%(%G%#%?(B</title>
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@
 	    $B?7$7$$%Q!<%F%#%7%g%s$r%^%&%s%H$G$-$J$$!"(B
 	    $B$H$$$&%(%i!<$OL5;k$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(BLabel Editor $B$+$iH4$1!"(B
 	    <application>sysinstall</application> $B$r=*N;$7$^$9!#(B</para>
-	  </step>
+	</step>
 
 	<step>
 	  <title>$B=*N;(B</title>
@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@
       <para>FreeBSD $B$O%"%l%$Fb$N>c32%G%#%9%/$rF0:nCf$K8r49$G$-$^$9!#(B
 	$B$?$@$7!":F5/F0A0$K$=$l$r8!CN$7$F$$$k$3$H$,I,MW$G$9!#(B</para>
 
-      <para><filename>/var/log/messages</filename>, $B$^$?$O(B &man.dmesg.8;
+      <para><filename>/var/log/messages</filename> $B$^$?$O(B &man.dmesg.8;
 	$B$N=PNO$K<!$N$h$&$J9T$,$"$k$G$7$g$&!#(B</para>
 
       <programlisting>ad6 on monster1 suffered a hard error.
@@ -1328,7 +1328,7 @@
 
 	  <para>$B=jK>$N%G%#%9%/%5%$%:$O(B &man.fdformat.1; $B$K(B <option>-f</option>
 	    $B%U%i%0$rDL$7$FEO$5$l$^$9!#BP1~$7$F$$$k%5%$%:$O(B &man.fdcontrol.8;
-	    $B$N%^%K%e%"%k%Z!<%8$K7G:\$5$l$F$$$^$9$,!":GNI$KF0:n$9$k$O(B 1440kB $B$@$H=u8@$7$F$*$-$^$9!#(B</para>
+	    $B$N%^%K%e%"%k%Z!<%8$K7G:\$5$l$F$$$^$9$,!":GNI$KF0:n$9$k$N$O(B 1440kB $B$@$H=u8@$7$F$*$-$^$9!#(B</para>
 	</sect4>
       </sect3>
 
@@ -1540,7 +1540,7 @@
       <para>$B%G!<%?%9%k!<%W%C%H$O(B 150kB/s $B$+$i(B 500kB/s $B$NHO0O$G$9!#(B
 	$B%G!<%?MFNL$NHO0O$O(B 40MB $B$+$i(B 15GB $B$G$9!#(B
 	$B%O!<%I%&%'%"05=L$,:G6a$N%I%i%$%V$NB?$/$G;HMQ$G$-$^$9!#(B
-	QIC $B%I%i%$%V$O(B DAT$B%I%i%$%V$KCV$-49$($i$l$D$D$"$j!"(B
+	QIC $B%I%i%$%V$O(B DAT $B%I%i%$%V$KCV$-49$($i$l$D$D$"$j!"(B
 	$B$"$^$jIQHK$K$OMxMQ$5$l$J$/$J$C$F$$$^$9!#(B</para>
 
       <para>$B%G!<%?$OJ#?t$N%H%i%C%/$KJ,$+$l$F%F!<%W$K5-O?$5$l$^$9!#(B
@@ -1684,7 +1684,7 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
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 	    ($B%O!<%I%G%#%9%/A4BN$NF|!9$N%P%C%/%"%C%W$K(B 1 $B%@!<%9!"(B
 	    $BD94|4V$J$iK\Ev$K$?$/$5$s(B)$B!#(B</para>
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