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>>> On Tue, 25 Jan 2005 13:38:45 +0900, TAOKA Fumiyoshi <fmysh@iijmio-mail.jp> said:

> > > $B:9J,$rFI$s$G$_$^$7$?$,!":G=i$NJ8$N(B in a book $B$,(B
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> > 
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> 
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--- chapter.sgml.hiroo	Wed Jan 26 01:41:55 2005
+++ chapter.sgml	Wed Jan 26 01:44:14 2005
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
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       <title>$BF,;z8l(B</title>
 
-      <para>$B0lHLE*$K!"F,;z8l$,:G=i$KI=$l$?;~$O(B "Network Time Protocol
+      <para>$B0lHLE*$K!"F,;z8l$,J8=qCf$K:G=i$KI=$l$?;~$O(B "Network Time Protocol
 	(<acronym role="Network Time Protocol">NTP</acronym>)." $B$N$h$&(B
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