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>>> On Wed, 26 Jan 2005 01:49:27 +0900, Hideyuki KURASHINA <rushani@bl.mmtr.or.jp> said:

> $BARIJ$G$9!#(B
> 
> >>> On Tue, 25 Jan 2005 13:38:45 +0900, TAOKA Fumiyoshi <fmysh@iijmio-mail.jp> said:
> 
> > > > $B:9J,$rFI$s$G$_$^$7$?$,!":G=i$NJ8$N(B in a book $B$,(B
> > > > $BLu$5$l$F$$$J$$$N$K5$IU$$$?$/$i$$$G$9!#(B
> > > 
> > > $B!VJ8=qCf$K!W$rJd$($P$h$$$G$7$g$&$+(B?
> > 
> > $B$O$$!"$=$l$GNI$$$s$8$c$J$G$7$g$&$+!#(B
> > $B8e$K8=$l$k(B one per book $B$,!VJ8=qA4BN$G(B1$B2s!W$H$J$C$F$$$^$9$7!#(B
> 
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> --- chapter.sgml.hiroo	Wed Jan 26 01:41:55 2005
> +++ chapter.sgml	Wed Jan 26 01:44:14 2005
> @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
>      <sect2>
>        <title>$BF,;z8l(B</title>
>  
> -      <para>$B0lHLE*$K!"F,;z8l$,:G=i$KI=$l$?;~$O(B "Network Time Protocol
> +      <para>$B0lHLE*$K!"F,;z8l$,J8=qCf$K:G=i$KI=$l$?;~$O(B "Network Time Protocol
>  	(<acronym role="Network Time Protocol">NTP</acronym>)." $B$N$h$&(B
                                                             ^
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      <para>Acronyms should generally be spelled out the first time
        they appear in a book, as in: "Network Time Protocol (<acronym
        role="Network Time Protocol">NTP</acronym>)." After the
        acronym has been defined, you should generally use the acronym

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