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$BARIJ$G$9!#(B
$B$*$D$+$l$5$^$G$9!#(B

>>> On Sun, 06 Feb 2005 12:09:35 +0900, Hiroo Ono <hiroo@oikumene.gcd.org> said:

> $B>.Ln42@8$G$9!#(B
> 
> common/new.sgml $B$N:9J,(B
> -  <pubdate>$FreeBSD: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml,v 1.22.2.386 2003/10/19 18:33:34 bmah Exp $</pubdate>
> +  <pubdate>$FreeBSD: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common/new.sgml,v 1.22.2.419.2.9 2005/01/21 11:16:10 hrs Exp $</pubdate>
> $B$rLu$7$^$7$?!#(B

$B::FI$7$^$7$?!#(B

$B:9J,$r$D$1$^$9!#(B

> $B:#$4$m5$$E$$$?$N$G$9$,!"%Y!<%9$K$7$?F|K\8lHG$O(B
>     $FreeBSD: src/release/doc/ja_JP.eucJP/relnotes/common/new.sgml,v 1.5.2.53 2003/11/03 14:02:26 rushani Exp $
> $B$G!"(B4.9R $B$N%j%j!<%9%N!<%H$N@5<0HG$G$O$J$$$+$b$7$l$^$;$s!#(B
> cvs $B$G(B tag $B$,$D$$$F$$$k$N$r;H$C$F$7$^$$$^$7$?!#(B
> 

4.9R $B$N%j%j!<%9%N!<%H$N@5<0HG$O(B 1.5.2.52 $B$G$9$,!"$3$l$H(B 1.5.2.53 $B$N:9$O(B

  1. $B3F@a$N5-=R$r6u$K(B
  2. sendmail $B$,(B 8.12.10 $B$K99?7$5$l$?(B

$B$@$1$G!"(B2 $B$O>.Ln$5$s$,Ds=P$7$F$/$@$5$C$?%Q%C%A$G$3$NItJ,$N5-=R$,(B
$B99?7$5$l$F$$$k$N$G!"Bg>fIW$G$9!#(B

-- rushani

--- new.sgml.hiroo	Mon Feb  7 03:08:01 2005
+++ new.sgml	Mon Feb  7 05:44:57 2005
@@ -103,18 +103,18 @@
 
     <para>$B967b<T$,%m!<%+%k$+$i%+!<%M%k%a%b%j$N0lIt$rFI$_=q$-$G$-$k(B
       &os; $B$N(B Linux $B%P%$%J%j8_49@-$K$*$1$k%W%m%0%i%`>e$N4V0c$$$,=$@5$5(B
-      $B$l$^$7$?!#>\$7$/$O!"%;%-%e%j%F%#4+9p(B
+      $B$l$^$7$?!#>\:Y$O!"%;%-%e%j%F%#4+9p(B
       <ulink url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/CERT/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-04:13.linux.asc">FreeBSD-SA-04:13.linux</ulink>
       $B$r$4Mw$/$@$5$$!#(B</para>
 
     <para><application>CVS</application> $B$N%5!<%P%b!<%I$K%j%b!<%H$+$i(B
-      $B0-MQ$G$-$k?tB?$/$N%;%-%e%j%F%#>e$N<eE@$,H/8+$5$l$^$7$?!#<eE@$N$&(B
-      $B$A$K$O!"%a%b%j$NFs=E3+J|(B (double-free)$B!"@0?t1i;;$N%*!<%P%U%m!<!"(B
-      $B%P%C%U%!%*!<%P%U%m!<$,4^$^$l!">pJs$NO31L!"%5!<%S%95qH]967b!"$*$h(B
-      $B$S(B/ $B$^$?$OG$0U$N%3!<%I<B9T$G$-$k2DG=@-$,$"$j$^$7$?!#$3$N@H<e@-$O!"(B
-      <application>CVS</application> 1.11.17 $B$X%"%C%W%0%l!<%I$7$F=$@5(B
+      $B0-MQ$G$-$k?tB?$/$N%;%-%e%j%F%#>e$N<eE@$,H/8+$5$l$^$7$?!#$3$l(B
+      $B$K$O!"%a%b%j$NFs=E3+J|(B (double-free)$B!"@0?t1i;;$N%*!<%P%U%m!<!"(B
+      $B%P%C%U%!%*!<%P%U%m!<$,4^$^$l!">pJs$NO31L!"%5!<%S%95qH]967b!"(B
+      $BG$0U$N%3!<%I$N<B9T$,C1FH$^$?$OJ#9g$7$FH/@8$9$k2DG=@-$,$"$j$^$7$?!#$3$N$<$$<e@-$O!"(B
+      <application>CVS</application> 1.11.17 $B$X99?7$7$F=$@5(B
       $B$5$l$^$7$?!#(B
-      $B>\$7$/$O!"%;%-%e%j%F%#4+9p(B
+      $B>\:Y$O!"%;%-%e%j%F%#4+9p(B
       <ulink url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/CERT/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-04:14.cvs.asc">FreeBSD-SA-04:14</ulink>
       (<ulink url="http://home.jp.freebsd.org/cgi-bin/showmail/announce-jp/1247">$BF|K\8lLu(B</ulink>)
       $B$r$4Mw$/$@$5$$!#(B</para>
@@ -127,9 +127,9 @@
       $B$r$4Mw$/$@$5$$!#(B</para>
 
     <para>$B%m!<%+%k$N0-0U$"$k%f!<%6$,!"%7%9%F%`$r%Q%K%C%/$5$;$F%m!<%+%k(B
-      $B%5!<%S%95qH]967b$r9T$C$?$j!"%+!<%M%k%a%b%j$N0lIt$rFI$_=P$;$k(B
+      $B%5!<%S%95qH]967b$r9T$C$?$j!"%+!<%M%k%a%b%j$N0lIt$rIT@5$KFI$_=P$;$k(B
       &man.procfs.5; $B$*$h$S(B &man.linprocfs.5; $B$N%P%0$,=$@5$5$l$^$7$?!#(B
-      $B>\$7$/$O!"%;%-%e%j%F%#4+9p(B
+      $B>\:Y$O!"%;%-%e%j%F%#4+9p(B
       <ulink url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/CERT/advisories/FreeBSD-SA-04:17.procfs.asc">FreeBSD-SA-04:17</ulink>
       (<ulink url="http://home.jp.freebsd.org/cgi-bin/showmail/announce-jp/1263">$BF|K\8lLu(B</ulink>)
       $B$r$4Mw$/$@$5$$!#(B</para>
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@
       <title>$B%W%i%C%H%U%)!<%`8GM-$N%O!<%I%&%'%"$NBP1~>u67(B</title>
 
       <para arch="i386">$B%b!<%I(B 0 (simple I/O) $B$GF0:n$7$F$$$k(B Intel
-	8255A PPI ($B%W%m%0%i%`2DG=$J<~JU%$%s%?%U%'!<%9(B) $B%A%C%W$KBP1~$9(B
+	8255A PPI (PPI; $B%W%m%0%i%`2DG=$J<~JU%$%s%?%U%'!<%9(B) $B%A%C%W$KBP1~$9(B
 	$B$k(B &man.pbio.4; $B%I%i%$%P$,DI2C$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
       <para arch="alpha">DS10 $B%/%i%9$N%7%9%F%`$G$O!"%U%m%C%T!<%$%s%?(B
@@ -189,13 +189,13 @@
       <para>Ethernet $B%O%V$N$h$&$K?6Iq$&C1=c$J%Q%1%C%HJ,G[$KBP1~$7$?(B
         Netgraph $B%N!<%I7?(B &man.ng.hub.4; $B$,DI2C$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
-      <para>&man.sk.4; $B%I%i%$%P$N(B jumbo $B%U%l!<%`A`:n$N%P%0$,=$@5$5$l$^(B
+      <para>&man.sk.4; $B%I%i%$%P$N(B jumbo $B%U%l!<%`$N=hM}$K$"$C$?%P%0$,=$@5$5$l$^(B
 	$B$7$?!#(B</para>
 
       <para>&man.vr.4; $B%I%i%$%P$,(B &man.polling.4; $B$KBP1~$7$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
       <para>$B%$%s%?%U%'!<%9Kh$N(B &man.polling.4; $BBP1~$,<BAu$5$l$^$7$?!#(B
-	&man.polling.4; $B$KBP1~$7$F$$$kA4$F$N%M%C%H%o!<%/%I%i%$%P(B
+	&man.polling.4; $B$KBP1~$7$F$$$k$9$Y$F$N%M%C%H%o!<%/%I%i%$%P(B
 	(&man.dc.4;, &man.fxp.4;, &man.em.4;, &man.nge.4;, &man.re.4;,
 	&man.rl.4;, &man.sis.4;, &man.ste.4;, $B$*$h$S(B &man.vr.4;)
 	$B$O$3$N5!G=$KBP1~$7$F$*$j!"(B&man.ifconfig.8; $B$+$i@)8f$G$-$^$9!#(B</para>
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
       <para><varname>net.inet.ip.rtexpire</varname>,
 	<varname>net.inet6.ip6.rtexpire</varname> $B$N$$$:$l$+!"$b$7$/$O(B
 	$BN>J}$,(B <literal>0</literal> $B$K@_Dj$5$l$F$$$k;~$K%7%9%F%`$,%Q%K%C(B
-	$B%/$7$F$$$?$N$,=$@5$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
+	$B%/$9$kLdBj$,=$@5$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
 <!-- Above this line, order network driver changes by manpage/variable name-->
 
@@ -213,73 +213,71 @@
       <title>$B%M%C%H%o!<%/%W%m%H%3%k(B</title>
 
       <para>$B0l;~E*$J%]!<%H$r%i%s%@%`$K3NJ]$9$k(B OpenBSD $BM3Mh$N<jK!$,<B(B
-	$BAu$5$l$^$7$?!#$3$l$O%G%U%)%k%H$GM-8z$K$J$C$F$$$F!"(Bsysctl $BJQ?t(B
+	$BAu$5$l$^$7$?!#$3$l$O%G%U%)%k%H$GM-8z$K$J$C$F$*$j!"(Bsysctl $BJQ?t(B
 	<varname>net.inet.ip.portrange.randomized</varname> $B$GL58z$K$G(B
 	$B$-$^$9!#@\B3IQEY$,9b$$>l9g$O!"%i%s%@%`2=$K$h$jHs>o$KAa$/%]!<%H(B
 	$B$,:FMxMQ$5$l$k$3$H$K$D$J$,$j$+$M$:!"%f!<%6!<$K$h$C$F$OLdBj$K$J(B
 	$B$j$^$9!#%i%s%@%`%]!<%H$N%;%-%e%j%F%#>e$NMxE@$rJ];}$7$D$D@5$7$$(B
 	$BF0:n$rJ]>Z$9$k$?$a$K!"@\B3IQEY$,9b$$>l9g$3$N5!G=$OL58z$K$J$j$^(B
 	$B$9!#(B
-	$B$b$C$H>\$7$/=q$/$H!"KhIC$N@\B3?t$,(B sysctl $BJQ?t(B
+	$B6qBNE*$K$O!"KhIC$N@\B3?t$,(B sysctl $BJQ?t(B
 	<varname>net.inet.ip.portrange.randomcps</varname> ($B%G%U%)%k%H(B
 	$B$G$O(B <literal>10</literal>) $B$rD6$($?>l9g!"%i%s%@%`2=$O(B sysctl
 	$BJQ?t(B <varname>net.inet.ip.portrange.randomtime</varname> $B$G;X(B
-	$BDj$5$l$?IC?t(B ($B%G%U%)%k%H$O(B <literal>45</literal>) $BL58z$K$J$j$^(B
+	$BDj$5$l$?IC?t(B ($B%G%U%)%k%H$O(B <literal>45</literal>) $B$GL58z$K$J$j$^(B
 	$B$9!#(B</para>
 
       <para>&man.ipfw.4; $B$,%k%C%/%"%C%W%F!<%V%k$KBP1~$7$^$7$?!#$3$N5!(B
 	$BG=$O9-HO0O$NAB$J%"%I%l%9=89g$r07$&$N$KM-MQ$G$9!#(B</para>
 
       <para>&man.ipnat.8; $B$O!"(BTCP/UDP $B0J30$N%Q%1%C%H$K$D$$$F$b(B
-	redirect $B%k!<%k$,F0$/$h$&$K$J$j$^$7$?!#(B</para>
+	redirect $B%k!<%k$,F0:n$9$k$h$&$K$J$j$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
       <para>&os; TCP $B%9%?%C%/$N(B <literal>RST</literal> $B$N07$$$,!"9-HO(B
-	$B0O$N(B TCP $B%9%?%C%/$H$N8_49@-$r0];}$7$D$D(B reset $B967b$r$"$?$&8B$j(B
-	$BFq$7$/$9$k$h$&$K2~NI$5$l$^$7$?!#(B
+	$B0O$N(B TCP $B%9%?%C%/$H$N8_49@-$r0];}$7$D$D(B reset $B967b$,2DG=$J8B$j(B
+	$B:$Fq$K$J$k$h$&$K2~NI$5$l$^$7$?!#(B
 	$B%"%k%4%j%:%`$O<!$N$H$*$j$G$9!#(B
 	<literal>ESTABLISHED</literal> $B>uBV$N@\B3$K$D$$$F$O!"%7!<%1%s(B
 	$B%9HV9f$,(B <varname>last_ack_sent</varname> $B$H@53N$K0lCW$9$k%j%;%C(B
-	$B%H$N$_$,%j%;%C%H$r5/$3$7$^$9!#$=$l0J30$NCGJR$O2?$b$;$:$KL5;k$5(B
+	$B%H$N$_$,%j%;%C%H$r5/$3$7$^$9!#$=$l0J30$N%;%0%a%s%H$O2?$b$;$:$KL5;k$5(B
 	$B$l$^$9!#$=$l0J30$N>uBV$N@\B3$K$D$$$F$O!"%&%#%s%I%&Fb$N$I$N%j%;%C(B
-	$B%H$G$"$C$F$b@\B3$r%j%;%C%H$7$^$9!#$=$l0J30$NCGJR$O2?$b$;$:$KL5(B
+	$B%H$G$"$C$F$b@\B3$r%j%;%C%H$7$^$9!#$=$l0J30$N%;%0%a%s%H$O2?$b$;$:$KL5(B
 	$B;k$5$l$^$9!#$3$l$O(B RFC 793 $B$N;EMM$K0cH?$7$F$*$j!"(Bsysctl $BJQ?t(B
 	<varname>net.inet.tcp.insecure_rst</varname> $B$r(B
 	<literal>1</literal> $B$K@_Dj$9$k$3$H$G!"$3$N5!G=$rL58z$K$7$F!"(B
-	$B=>Mh$NF0:n$rMQ$$$k$3$H$,$G$-$^$9!#(B</para>
+	$B=>Mh$NF0:n$KLa$9$3$H$,$G$-$^$9!#(B</para>
     </sect3>
 
     <sect3 id="disks">
       <title>$B%G%#%9%/!&5-21AuCV(B</title>
 
-      <para>IBM/Adaptec ServeRAID $B%3%s%H%m!<%i$KBP1~$9$k(B &man.ips.4; 
+      <para>IBM/Adaptec ServeRAID $B%3%s%H%m!<%i$KBP1~$9$k(B &man.ips.4;
 	$B%I%i%$%P$,DI2C$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
-      <para>&man.mpt.4; $B%I%i%$%P$,(B LSI Logic FC929X $B%G%e%"%k(B 2Gb/s $B%U%!(B
-	$B%$%P%A%c%s%M%k%+!<%I$KBP1~$7$^$7$?!#(B</para>
+      <para>&man.mpt.4; $B%I%i%$%P$,(B LSI Logic FC929X $B%G%e%"%k(B 2Gb/s
+	Fibre Channel $B%+!<%I$KBP1~$7$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
       <para>&man.trm.4; $B%I%i%$%P$,(B DC395U2W $B%"%@%W%?$KBP1~$7!"9bIi2Y;~(B
 	$B$NLdBj$,=$@5$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
     </sect3>
+  </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="userland">
     <title>$B%f!<%6%i%s%I$NJQ99E@(B</title>
 
-    <para>&man.cron.8 $B%G!<%b%s$,?7$?$K(B 2 $B$D%*%W%7%g%s$r<u$1IU$1$k$h$&(B
-      $B$K$J$j$^$7$?!#(B<option>-j</option> $B%*%W%7%g%s$H(B
-      <option>-J</option> $B$G!"$=$l$>$lFC8"$r;}$?$J$$%f!<%6$H%9!<%Q%f!<(B
-      $B%68"8B$GAv$k%8%g%V$K$D$$$F;~4V$NMI$i$.(B (jitter) $B$rM-8z$K$7$^$9!#(B
-      $B;~4V$NMI$i$.$H$$$&$N$O!"(B&man.cron.8 $B$,%8%g%V$r<B9T$9$kA0$K!";XDj(B
+    <para>&man.cron.8 $B%G!<%b%s$K%8%g%V$r3+;O$9$k;~4V$rJQF0$5$;$k$3$H$,(B
+      $B$G$-$k$h$&$K$J$j$^$7$?!#(B<option>-j</option> $B%*%W%7%g%s$OFC8"$r(B
+      $B;}$?$J$$%f!<%6!"(B<option>-J</option> $B%*%W%7%g%s$O%9!<%Q%f!<%6MQ$G$9!#(B
+      $B;~4V$NJQF0$H$$$&$N$O!"(B&man.cron.8 $B$,%8%g%V$r<B9T$9$kA0$K!";XDj(B
       $B$5$l$?HO0OFb$NC;$$%i%s%@%`$J4|4V(B sleep $B$9$k$H$$$&$3$H$r0UL#$7$^(B
       $B$9!#$3$N5!G=$OB?$/$N%8%g%V$,FCDj$N=V4V$KM=Dj$5$l$F$$$k>l9g$NIi2Y(B
       $B$N%T!<%/$r$J$@$i$+$K$9$k$3$H$r0U?^$7$?$b$N$G$9!#(B</para>
 
     <para>&man.fwcontrol.8; $B$,%G%U%)%k%H$N(B <literal>fwmem</literal> $B%?!<(B
-      $B%2%C%H$rDj$a$k(B <option>-m</option> $B%*%W%7%g%s$KBP1~$7$^$7$?!#(B</para>
+      $B%2%C%H$r;XDj$9$k(B <option>-m</option> $B%*%W%7%g%s$KBP1~$7$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
-    <para><option>-C 60</option> $B%*%W%7%g%s$,!"(B
-      <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename> $B$K$*$1$k%G%U%)%k%H$N(B
-      <varname>$inetd_flags</varname> $BJQ?t$G;XDj$5$l$k$h$&$K$J$j$^$7$?!#(B
-      </para>
+    <para><varname>$inetd_flags</varname> $BJQ?t$N=i4|@_Dj$K(B
+      <option>-C 60</option> $B%*%W%7%g%s$,DI2C$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
     <para><application>libc</application> $B$,(B &man.eui64.3; $B4X?t$KBP1~(B
       $B$7$^$7$?!#(B</para>
@@ -288,16 +286,17 @@
       <application>GraphViz</application> (.dot) $B$r@8@.$9$k(B
       <command>dot</command> $B%3%^%s%I$rHw$($^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
-    <para>&man.ppp.8; $B$N(B LQM (Link Quality Monitoring$B!"%j%s%/IJ<A%b%K(B
-      $B%?%j%s%0(B) $BBP1~$,:F<BAu$5$l$^$7$?!#(BRFC 1989 $B$K5-=R$5$l$F$$$k(B LQM 
-      $B$O!"(BPPP $B$,<B9TCf$N@\B3$NIJ<A$r5-O?$G$-$k$h$&$K$7$^$9!#(B</para>
+    <para>&man.ppp.8; $B$N(B LQM (Link Quality Monitoring; $B%j%s%/IJ<A%b%K(B
+      $B%?%j%s%0(B) $BBP1~$,:F<BAu$5$l$^$7$?!#(BLQM
+      $B$O!"(BPPP $B$,<B9TCf$N@\B3$NIJ<A$r5-O?$G$-$k$h$&$K$9$k$b$N$G$9!#(B
+      $B>\:Y$O(B RFC 1989 $B$r$4Mw$/$@$5$$!#(B</para>
 
     <para>$B%f!<%6%i%s%I(B &man.ppp.8; $B<BAu$,!"Dj4|E*$K(B RADIUS $B%"%+%&%s%H(B
 	$B>pJs$r(B RADIUS $B%5!<%P$KAw?.$9$k(B <quote>set rad_alive
-	<replaceable>N</replaceable></quote> $B%3%^%s%I$r%5%]!<%H$7$^$7(B
+	<replaceable>N</replaceable></quote> $B%3%^%s%I$KBP1~$7$^$7(B
 	$B$?!#(B</para>
 
-    <para>$B$"$k%$%s%?%U%'!<%9$K(B 2 $B$D0J>e$N(B IP $B%"%I%l%9$,$D$$$F$$$k>l9g(B
+    <para>$B$"$k%$%s%?%U%'!<%9$K(B 2 $B$D0J>e$N(B IP $B%"%I%l%9$r3d$jEv$F$F$$$k>l9g(B
       $B$K@5$7$/F0:n$7$J$/$J$k(B &man.rarpd.8; $B$N%P%0$,=$@5$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
     <para>&man.syslogd.8; $B$,(B <literal>LOG_NTP</literal> $B%U%!%7%j%F%#$K(B
@@ -306,11 +305,11 @@
     <para>&man.pax.1; $B$NB??t$N(B off-by-one $B%(%i!<$H%P%C%U%!!<%*!<%P%i%s(B
       $B$9$k2DG=@-$N$"$kItJ,$,=$@5$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
-    <para>&man.whois.1; $B$,(B NORID ($B%N%k%&%'!<$N%H%C%W%l%Y%k%l%8%9%H%j(B) 
+    <para>&man.whois.1; $B$,(B NORID (Norwegian top level registry; $B%N%k%&%'!<$N%H%C%W%l%Y%k%l%8%9%H%j(B)
       $B%O%s%I%k!"%I%$%D$N(B whois $B%M!<%`%5!<%P!"$*$h$S4Z9q$K$*$1$k(B IP $B%"(B
       $B%I%l%93d$jEv$F$N>\:Y$rJ];}$7$F$$$k(B <hostid
-      role="fqdn">whois.krnic.net</hostid> ($B4Z9q9qN)%$%s%?!<%M%C%H3+H/(B
-      $B6I!"(Bthe National Internet Development Agency of Korea) $B$KLd$$9g(B
+      role="fqdn">whois.krnic.net</hostid> (the National Internet Development Agency of Korea;
+      $B4Z9q9qN)%$%s%?!<%M%C%H3+H/6I(B) $B$KLd$$9g(B
       $B$o$;$k(B <option>-k</option> $B%U%i%0$KBP1~$7$^$7$?!#(B</para>
 
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