From owner-doc-jp-work@jp.FreeBSD.org Fri Oct 28 20:18:46 2005
Received: (from daemon@localhost)
	by castle.jp.FreeBSD.org (8.11.6p2+3.4W/8.11.3) id j9SBIkf73827;
	Fri, 28 Oct 2005 20:18:46 +0900 (JST)
	(envelope-from owner-doc-jp-work@jp.FreeBSD.org)
Received: from mail2.zenno.net (mail2.zenno.net [219.122.47.34])
	by castle.jp.FreeBSD.org (8.11.6p2+3.4W/8.11.3) with SMTP/inet id j9SBIkw73822
	for <doc-jp-work@jp.FreeBSD.org>; Fri, 28 Oct 2005 20:18:46 +0900 (JST)
	(envelope-from solidsneak@hyper.cx)
Received: (qmail 4594 invoked by uid 7798); 28 Oct 2005 20:18:45 +0900
Received: from solidsneak@hyper.cx by mail2.zenno.net by uid 7791 with qmail-scanner-1.22 
 ( Clear:RC:1(221.251.22.118):. 
 Processed in 0.183148 secs); 28 Oct 2005 20:18:45 +0900
Received: from unknown (HELO ?127.0.0.1?) (221.251.22.118)
  by mail2.zenno.net with SMTP; 28 Oct 2005 20:18:45 +0900
From: Hiroki Kobayashi <solidsneak@hyper.cx>
To: doc-jp-work@jp.FreeBSD.org
X-Mailer-Plugin: BkASPil for Becky!2 Ver.2.051
Message-Id: <20051028201719.09DB.SOLIDSNEAK@hyper.cx>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-2022-JP"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
X-Mailer: Becky! ver. 2.22.02 [ja]
Reply-To: doc-jp-work@jp.FreeBSD.org
Precedence: list
Date: Fri, 28 Oct 2005 20:18:43 +0900
X-Sequence: doc-jp-work 1429
Subject: [doc-jp-work 1429] docproj/submitting.sgml 1.13 -> 1.17
Sender: owner-doc-jp-work@jp.FreeBSD.org
X-Originator: solidsneak@hyper.cx
X-Distribute: distribute version 2.1 (Alpha) patchlevel 24e+050320

$B>.NS$G$9!#(B

$BK]Lu$,40N;$7$^$7$?$N$G::FI$*4j$$$7$^$9!#(B
docproj/submitting.sgml 1.13 -> 1.17



--- submitting.sgml.orig	Thu Oct 27 22:01:25 2005
+++ submitting.sgml	Fri Oct 28 20:15:06 2005
@@ -2,10 +2,11 @@
 <!ENTITY base CDATA "..">
 <!ENTITY date "$FreeBSD: www/ja/docproj/submitting.sgml,v 1.16 2003/06/11 21:24:47 hrs Exp $">
 <!ENTITY title "FreeBSD Documentation Project: Submitting documentation">
+<!ENTITY % navincludes SYSTEM "../includes.navdocs.sgml"> %navincludes;
 <!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes;
 ]>
 <!-- The FreeBSD Japanese Documentation Project -->
-<!-- Original revision: 1.13 -->
+<!-- Original revision: 1.17 -->
 
 <html>
     &header;
@@ -20,11 +21,11 @@
       $B$b$72DG=$J$i!"%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s$r(B FTP $B$d(B Web $B$N%5%$%H$KCV$$$F$/$@$5$$!#(B
     </p>
 
-    <p>$B$=$l$+$i!"(B -doc $B%a!<%j%s%0%j%9%H$X%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s$N35MW$H8x3+>l=j!"(B
+    <p>$B$=$l$+$i!"(B <tt>FreeBSD-doc</tt> $B%a!<%j%s%0%j%9%H$X%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s$N35MW$H8x3+>l=j!"(B
       $B%3%a%s%H$NAw$j@h$r5-$7$?%a%C%;!<%8$rEj9F$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(B</p>
 
     <p>$BM}M3$,$"$C$F%I%-%e%a%s%H$r(BFTP$B$d%&%'%V%5%$%H$K$*$1$J$$$H$-$O!"(B
-       -doc $B%a!<%j%s%0%j%9%H$KD>@\$*$/$C$F$b$$$$$G$9!#(B
+       <tt>FreeBSD-doc</tt> $B%a!<%j%s%0%j%9%H$KD>@\$*$/$C$F$b$$$$$G$9!#(B
        $B$=$N;~$O%W%l%$%s%F%-%9%H$G$@$1$*4j$$$7$^$9!#(B</p>
 
     <p>$B$=$N%a%C%;!<%8$rB>$NE,@Z$J%a!<%j%s%0%j%9%H$K(B cc:
@@ -66,14 +67,17 @@
     <p>$B$=$l$+$i!"(B
 	$B$=$N$3$H$r%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s%W%m%8%'%/%H$KCN$i$;$kI,MW$,$"$j$^$9!#(B
 	$B8f;HMQ$N%^%7%s$K$b%$%s%9%H!<%k$5$l$F$$$k$O$:$N(B
-	<b>send-pr</b> $B$H$$$&%3%^%s%I$r;H$&$N$,@5$7$$J}K!$G$9!#(B</p>
+	<b>send-pr</b> $B$H$$$&%3%^%s%I$r;H$&$N$,@5$7$$J}K!$G$9!#(B
+	<a href="&base;/send-pr.html">WWW $BLdBjJs9p%U%)!<%`(B</a>$B$r;HMQ$7$F$b$+$^$$$^$;$s!#(B</p>
       
 	<p>$B$3$N%3%^%s%I$r;H$&$N$O!"(B
 	$B$"$J$?$,4s9F$7$?$3$H$r8e$+$i3NG'$9$k$3$H$,$G$-$k$+$i$G$9!#(B
 	PR (Problem Report) $B$rAw$k$H!"$=$l$>$l$K8GM-$JHV9f$,3d$jEv$F$i$l$^$9!#(B
 	$B$=$N8e!"(BCommiter $B$NC/$+$,$=$N(B PR $B$rC4Ev$7!"(B
 	$B?7$7$$%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s$N(B commit
-	$B$K4X$7$F$"$J$?$KO"Mm$9$k$3$H$K$J$j$^$9!#(B</p>
+	$B$K4X$7$F$"$J$?$KO"Mm$9$k$3$H$K$J$j$^$9!#(B
+	$B>\$7$/$O!"(B
+	<a href="&url.articles;/problem-reports/">FreeBSD $BLdBjJs9p$r=q$/(B</a>$B$r;2>H$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(B</p>
 
 	<p><b>send-pr</b> $B<+BN$OHs>o$KC1=c$G$9!#$A$g$C$HFC<l$J7A<0$N(B e-mail
 	$B$rFCDj$N%"%I%l%9$KAw$k$@$1$@$+$i$G$9!#(B
@@ -83,7 +87,7 @@
 
 	<p>"Category" $B$r(B "docs" $B$K!"(B"Class" $B$r(B "change-request"
 	$B$K@_Dj$7$F$/$@$5$$!#@h$K:n$C$F$*$$$?(B <tt>.uue</tt> 
-	$B%U%!%$%k$r(BPR $B$K4^$a$^$7$g$&!#(B</p>
+	$B%U%!%$%k$r(B PR $B$NK\J8$K4^$a$^$7$g$&!#(B</p>
 
 	<p>$B%(%G%#%?$r=*N;$5$;$k$H!"(BPR $B$O(B e-mail $B$H$7$F@5$7$$>l=j$XAw$i$l$^$9!#(B
 	$B$$$/$i$b$7$J$$$&$A$K!"$"$J$?$,Aw$C$?(B PR
@@ -126,7 +130,7 @@
       <li><p>diff $B$r$D$/$j$^$9(B. $B$=$lMQ$N%3%^%s%I$O0J2<$N$h$&$K$J$j$^$9!#(B</p>
 
 	<pre>
-    % <b>diff -ru foo.sgml.old foo.sgml > foo.diff</b>
+    % <b>diff -u foo.sgml.old foo.sgml > foo.diff</b>
 	</pre>
 
 	<p>$BFs$D$N%U%!%$%k$NAj0cE@$rD4$Y!"$=$l$i$r(B <tt>foo.diff</tt>
@@ -138,6 +142,6 @@
 
 	<p></p><a href="docproj.html">FreeBSD
 	$B%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s%W%m%8%'%/%H$N%Z!<%8(B</a>
-&footer
+&footer;
   </body>
 </html>



