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  <p><em>$BLu(B: &a.ts;.<newline>6 September 1996.</em>

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l.31 $B?75l$N(B FreeBSD$B%P!<%8%g%s4V$N<gMW$J$b$N(B
     $B"*(B $B?75l$N%P!<%8%g%s$N(B FreeBSD $B$N4V$N<gMW$J$b$N(B
     $B$&!<$s!"$b$H$NJ}$,$$$$$G$9$+$M!)(B

l.59 $B86J8$K$"$k!"(B&lsqb; $B$H(B &rsqb; $B$,H4$1$F$^$9!#(B
     $B$A$J$_$K!"(B&lsqb; $B$O(B [ $B$G$"$j!"(B&rsqb; $B$O(B ] $B$G$9!#(B
     $BJL$K$$$i$J$$$h$&$J5$$b$7$^$9$M$'!#(B

l.67 - 68 $B!V(B<tt>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</tt> $B$H$$$&%7%'%k$r;H$&(B SLIP$B@lMQ(BID$B$G%m%0(B
            $B%$%s$7$^$9!W(B

           $B86J8$O(B

           $B!V(Blogs in with a special SLIP login ID that uses
             <tt>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</tt> as the special user's shell$B!W(B

           $B$G$9$+$i!"$&!<$s!D!D(B

           $B!V%7%'%k$H$7$F(B <tt>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</tt> $B$rMQ$$$k(B SLIP$B@lMQ(BID
             $B$G%m%0%$%s$7$^$9!W(B
            $B$H$+(B
            $B!V(BSLIP$B@lMQ(BID$B$G%m%0%$%s$7$^$9!#$3$N(BID$B$r;}$C$?%f!<%6$O%7%'%k$H$7$F(B
              <tt>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</tt> $B$rMQ$$$^$9!W(B
            $B$H$$$&46$8$G$7$g$&$+!)(B

l.88 $B$$$^(B <tt>/etc/sliphome/slip.hosts</tt> $B$K(B
     $B"*(B $B$$$^(B, <tt>/etc/sliphome/slip.hosts</tt> $B$K(B

l.176 - 177  name="FreeBSD$B%+!<%M%k$N%3%s%U%#%.%e%l!<%7%g%s(B"
             $B$3$l$O!";2>H@h$,(B "$B%+!<%M%k%3%s%U%#%0%l!<%7%g%s(B" $B$H$J$C$F$$$k(B
             $B$N$G!"$=$N$h$&$K=$@5$7$F$$$?$@$1$^$9$G$7$g$&$+!)(B
             $B!t(B $B!V%3%s%U%#%0!W$+!V%3%s%U%#%.%e!W$+$OCV$$$F$*$$$F!#(B

l.239, 256  $B%W%m%-%7(B ARP $B$G$9$,!"86J8$,(B ``proxy ARP'' $B$H$J$C$F$$$k$N$G!"(B
  289, 320      $B!V%W%m%-%7(B ARP$B!W$H$G$b$7$?J}$,NI$/$J$$$G$9$+!)(B
  347, 367
  390, 400  $B$&!<$s!"$G$b$3$l$@$1$"$k$H!"$=$N$^$^$G$b$$$$$G$9$+$M$'!)(B
