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$B$$$o$5$-!w$^$D$?$1$?$Y$?(J $B$G$9!#(J

Hiroyuki Hanai <hanai@astec.co.jp> $B$5$s$O(J
[doc-jp 1152] <review> slips.sgml $B$N7o$G(J
Wed, 18 Sep 1996 00:32:29 JST $B:"$K$*$C$7$c$$$^$7$?!#(J

hanai> ------  reviewing of slips.sgml ------------------
hanai> 
hanai> l.31 $B?75l$N(J FreeBSD$B%P!<%8%g%s4V$N<gMW$J$b$N(J
hanai>      $B"*(J $B?75l$N%P!<%8%g%s$N(J FreeBSD $B$N4V$N<gMW$J$b$N(J
hanai>      $B$&!<$s!"$b$H$NJ}$,$$$$$G$9$+$M!)(J

$BKM$,Lu$9$H$7$?$i!"$3$s$J$+$s$8$G$9!#(J
$B!V$3$l$i$,(J FreeBSD $B$N%P!<%8%g%s4V$N<gMW$JJQ99E@$H$J$j$^$9!#!W(J

$B86J8(J:
early versions of FreeBSD 2.X, which appear to be the only major
changes between FreeBSD versions.  If you do encounter mistakes in

hanai> l.67 - 68 $B!V(J<tt>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</tt> $B$H$$$&%7%'%k$r;H$&(J SLIP$B@lMQ(JID$B$G%m%0(J
hanai>             $B%$%s$7$^$9!W(J
hanai> 
hanai>            $B86J8$O(J
hanai> 
hanai>            $B!V(Jlogs in with a special SLIP login ID that uses
hanai>              <tt>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</tt> as the special user's shell$B!W(J
hanai> 
hanai>            $B$G$9$+$i!"$&!<$s!D!D(J
hanai> 
hanai>            $B!V%7%'%k$H$7$F(J <tt>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</tt> $B$rMQ$$$k(J SLIP$B@lMQ(JID
hanai>              $B$G%m%0%$%s$7$^$9!W(J
hanai>             $B$H$+(J
hanai>             $B!V(JSLIP$B@lMQ(JID$B$G%m%0%$%s$7$^$9!#$3$N(JID$B$r;}$C$?%f!<%6$O%7%'%k$H$7$F(J
hanai>               <tt>/usr/sbin/sliplogin</tt> $B$rMQ$$$^$9!W(J
hanai>             $B$H$$$&46$8$G$7$g$&$+!)(J

$BF1$80UL#$@$H;W$$$^$9!#(J

hanai> l.88 $B$$$^(J <tt>/etc/sliphome/slip.hosts</tt> $B$K(J
hanai>      $B"*(J $B$$$^(J, <tt>/etc/sliphome/slip.hosts</tt> $B$K(J
hanai> 
hanai> l.176 - 177  name="FreeBSD$B%+!<%M%k$N%3%s%U%#%.%e%l!<%7%g%s(J"
hanai>              $B$3$l$O!";2>H@h$,(J "$B%+!<%M%k%3%s%U%#%0%l!<%7%g%s(J" $B$H$J$C$F$$$k(J
hanai>              $B$N$G!"$=$N$h$&$K=$@5$7$F$$$?$@$1$^$9$G$7$g$&$+!)(J
hanai>              $B!t(J $B!V%3%s%U%#%0!W$+!V%3%s%U%#%.%e!W$+$OCV$$$F$*$$$F!#(J

$B!V%3%s%U%#%0%l!<%7%g%s!W$KE}0l$7$?$$$d$D$,(J
L165, 177, 179, 182, 192, 263, 343, 491 $B$K$"$j$^$9!#(J

hanai> 
hanai> l.239, 256  $B%W%m%-%7(J ARP $B$G$9$,!"86J8$,(J ``proxy ARP'' $B$H$J$C$F$$$k$N$G!"(J
hanai>   289, 320      $B!V%W%m%-%7(J ARP$B!W$H$G$b$7$?J}$,NI$/$J$$$G$9$+!)(J
hanai>   347, 367
hanai>   390, 400  $B$&!<$s!"$G$b$3$l$@$1$"$k$H!"$=$N$^$^$G$b$$$$$G$9$+$M$'!)(J

$B$\$/$O!V(Jproxy ARP$B!W$NJ}$,$o$+$j$d$9$$$G$9!#(J

$B$"$H!":Y$+$$$N$,$A$g$C$H$"$j$^$9!#(J

L33:
$B$H$b$K%a%$%k$G$*CN$i$;$$$?$@$1$l$P=u$+$j$^$9(J.
->
$B$H$b$KEE;R%a!<%k$G$*CN$i$;$$$?$@$1$l$P=u$+$j$^$9(J.

# $B!VEE;R%a!<%k!W$H$7$F$$$kJ}$,B?$$$N$G!#(J

L79:
$B$&$J$b$N$K$J$j$^$9(J ($B<B:]$K$O$R$H$D$N9T$KB3$$$F$$$k(J) . 
->
$B$&$J$b$N$K$J$j$^$9(J ($B<B:]$K$O0l$D$N9T$KB3$$$F$$$k(J) . 

# $B8D?t$rI=8=$9$k$N$G$"$l$P!"$3$C$A$NJ}$,D>4QE*$KM}2r$7$d$9$$$H;W$$$^$9!#(J
# L222 $B$bF1MM!#(J

L122:
FreeBSD$B$N%G%U%)%k%H$N%+!<%M%k$K$O(J, $BDL>o(J, $B$U$?$D$N(J SLIP$B%$%s%?%U%'!<%9$,(J
->
FreeBSD$B$N%G%U%)%k%H$N%+!<%M%k$K$O(J, $BDL>o(J, $BFs$D$N(J SLIP$B%$%s%?%U%'!<%9$,(J

# $B!V0l$D!W$HF1$8M}M3!#(J L140 $B$bF1MM!#(J

L141:
$B%9$,AH$_9~$^$l$F$$$k$H$$$&$3$H$,H=$j$^$9(J.  (<tt>sl0</tt> $B$H(J 
->
$B%9$,AH$_9~$^$l$F$$$k$H$$$&$3$H$r<($7$F$$$^$9(J.  (<tt>sl0</tt> $B$H(J 

# $B86J8$,!V(Jindicate$B!W$J$N$G!#(J

L173:
$B$3$N9T$K$h$C$F(J, $B;HMQ2DG=$J(J SLIP$B%G%P%$%9$NAm?t$,Dj$^$j$^$9(J. $B$9$J$o$A(J, $B9T(J
->
$B$3$N9T$K$h$C$F(J, $B;HMQ2DG=$J(J SLIP$B%G%P%$%9$NAm?t$,7h$^$j$^$9(J. $B$9$J$o$A(J, $B9T(J

# $B$3$C$A$NJ}$,<+A3$KFI$a$^$9!#(J

L186:
SLIP$B%f!<%6$*$h$S$=$N(J IP$B%"%I%l%9$r7h$a$^$9(J. $B%U%!%$%k(J 
<tt>slip.login</tt> $B$O(J, SLIP$B%$%s%?%U%'!<%9$r@_Dj$9$k$3$H$@$1$KDL>o$O;H(J
$BMQ$7$^$9(J. <tt>slip.logout</tt> $B$O%*%W%7%g%s$N%U%!%$%k$G(J,
->
SLIP$B%f!<%6$*$h$S$=$N(J IP$B%"%I%l%9$r7h$a$^$9(J. $BDL>o(J, $B%U%!%$%k(J 
<tt>slip.login</tt> $B$O(J SLIP$B%$%s%?%U%'!<%9$r@_Dj$9$k$?$a$@$1$K;H(J
$BMQ$7$^$9(J. <tt>slip.logout</tt> $B$O%*%W%7%g%s$N%U%!%$%k$G(J,

# $BC1$KFI$_$d$9$5$+$i!#(J

L246:
$BFHN)$7$?%5%V%M%C%H$r(J SLIP$B%/%i%$%"%s%H$XE,1~$9$k$H$-$K$O(J, $B$9$G$K3d$jEv(J
->
$BFHN)$7$?%5%V%M%C%H$r(J SLIP$B%/%i%$%"%s%H$XE,MQ$9$k$H$-$K$O(J, $B$9$G$K3d$jEv(J

# $B86J8$O!V(Juse$B!W$G$9$+$i!VE,MQ!W$G$9$h$M(J ^^;

L393:
$B$3$l$K$h$C$F(J, $B7+$jJV$7$FMxMQ$9$k$3$H$,$G$-$k$o$1$G$9(J. $B$/$l$0$l$b(J,
->
$B$3$l$K$h$C$F(J, $B7+$jJV$7$FMxMQ$9$k$3$H$,$G$-$k$o$1$G$9(J. $BI,$:(J,

# $B!V$/$l$0$l$b!W$H$/$k$H!V$7$J$$$h$&$K$7$F2<$5$$!W$r4|BT$7$F$7$^$$$^$9!#(J

L423:
$B@EE*7PO)$K$D$$$F$NF,DK$NBe0F$O(J, <tt>gated</tt> $B$r(J FreeBSD$B$K$h$k(J SLIP$B%5!<(J
->
$B@EE*7PO)$K$D$$$F$NF,DK$X$NBeBX<jCJ$O(J, <tt>gated</tt> $B$r(J FreeBSD$B$K$h$k(J SLIP$B%5!<(J

# $B$3$C$A$,9%$_$G$9!#(J

$B$G$o$G$o(J
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