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Subject: [man-jp-reviewer 593] (review) ipf.5
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ipf.5 $B$r%A%'%C%/$7$^$7$?!#0l2U=j(B typo $B$,$"$C$?(B($B%Q%1%C%H%""*%Q%1%C%H(B)$B$[(B
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$B=$@5$KITET9g$,$"$l$P!"KY@n$5$s$NH=CG$G85$KLa$7$FD:$1$l$P$h$m$7$$$+$H!#(B

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--- ipf.5-org	Thu Oct 15 19:29:21 1998
+++ ipf.5	Thu Oct 15 20:37:58 1998
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 .SH $BJ8K!(B
 .PP
 \fBipf\fP $B$,%U%#%k%?%k!<%k9=C[$K;HMQ$9$k%U%)!<%^%C%H$O!"(B
-$B<!$N$h$&$K(B BNF $B$r;H$C$?J8K!$G<($9$3$H$,$G$-$^$9(B:
+BNF $B$r;H$C$?J8K!$G<!$N$h$&$K<($9$3$H$,$G$-$^$9(B:
 \fC
 .nf
 filter-rule = [ insert ] action in-out [ options ] [ tos ] [ ttl ]
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
 .fi
 .PP
 $B$3$NJ8K!$O!"2DFI@-$N$?$a$K$$$/$V$s4JN,2=$7$F$$$^$9!#(B
-$B$3$NJ8K!$K%^%C%A$9$kAH$_9g$o$;$K$O!"(B
+$B$3$NJ8K!$K%^%C%A$9$kAH$_9g$o$;$G$"$C$F$b!"(B
 $B0UL#$r$J$5$J$$$?$a$K%=%U%H%&%'%"$,5v2D$7$J$$$b$N$,$"$j$^$9(B
 ($BHs(B TCP $B%Q%1%C%H$KBP$9$k(B tcp \fBflags\fP $B$J$I(B)$B!#(B
 .SH $B%U%#%k%?%k!<%k(B
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
 ICMP $B%Q%1%C%H(B (\fBreturn-icmp\fP) $B$^$?$O(B
 TCP $B!V%j%;%C%H!W(B (\fBreturn-rst\fP) $B$N$$$:$l$+$NJVEz%Q%1%C%H$rJV$9$h$&!"(B
 $B%U%#%k%?$K;X<($G$-$^$9!#(B
-$BG$0U$N(B IP $B%Q%1%C%H$KBP$7$F(B ICMP $B%Q%1%C%H$r@8@.$G$-!"(B
+ICMP $B%Q%1%C%H$O!"G$0U$N(B IP $B%Q%1%C%H$N1~Ez$H$7$F@8@.$G$-!"(B
 $B$=$N%?%$%W$r;XDj$9$k$3$H$b$G$-$^$9!#(B
 TCP $B%j%;%C%H$O!"(BTCP $B%Q%1%C%H$KBP$7$FE,MQ$5$l$k%k!<%k$K$*$$$F$N$_;HMQ$G$-$^$9!#(B
 .TP
@@ -163,9 +163,11 @@
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 $B<!$N8l$O(B \fBin\fP $B$+(B \fBout\fP $B$N$$$:$l$+$G$"$kI,MW$,$"$j$^$9!#(B
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+$B$P$+$j$G!"(B
 $B%+!<%M%k$N%W%m%H%3%k=hM}It$K8~$C$F0\F0$7$F$$$k(B) $B$+!"(B
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+$B308~$-(B ($B%W%m%H%3%k%9%?%C%/$K$h$jAw=P$^$?$OE>Aw$5$l!"(B
+$B%$%s%?%U%'!<%9$K8~$+$C$F$$$k(B)
 $B$+$N$$$:$l$+$G$9!#(B
 $B3F%U%#%k%?%k!<%k$,F~=PNO$N$I$A$iB&$KE,MQ$5$l$k$N$+$r!"(B
 $BL@<(E*$K<($9I,MW$,$"$j$^$9!#(B
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 $B%[%9%HL>$O!"(Bhosts $B%U%!%$%k$^$?$O(B DNS $BCf(B ($B@_Dj$d%i%$%V%i%j$K0MB8$7$^$9(B)
 $B$NM-8z$J%[%9%HL>$+!"%I%C%HIU$-?tCM7A<0$G$9!#(B
-$BFC<l$J%M%C%H%o!<%/;XDj$O$"$j$^$;$s$,!"%M%C%H%o!<%/L>$OG'<1$5$l$^$9!#(B
+$B%M%C%H%o!<%/;XDj$H$7$FFCJL$J5-K!$O$"$j$^$;$s$,!"%M%C%H%o!<%/L>$OG'<1$5$l$^$9!#(B
 $B%U%#%k%?%k!<%k$r(B DNS $B$K0MB8$5$;$k$H967b$NM>CO$rF3F~$7$F$7$^$&$N$G!"(B
 $B4+$a$i$l$^$;$s!#(B
 .PP
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 $BB?$/$N%?%$%W$,$"$j!"$3$N8@8l$GG'<1$5$l$kC;=L7A$d!"(B
 $B$3$l$K4XO"IU$1$i$l$??tCM$G;XDj$G$-$^$9!#(B
-$B%;%-%e%j%F%#$N4QE@$K$*$1$k:G=EMW;v9`$O(B ICMP $B%j%@%$%l%/%H$G$9!#(B
+$B%;%-%e%j%F%#$N4QE@$+$i$_$F:G$b=EMW$J$b$N$O(B ICMP $B%j%@%$%l%/%H$G$9!#(B
 .SH $BMzNrJ]B8(B
 .PP
 $B%U%#%k%?%k!<%k$K@_Dj2DG=$J!":G8e$+$i(B 2 $BHVL\$N%Q%i%a!<%?$O!"(B
@@ -403,7 +405,7 @@
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 $B$=$N%k!<%k$r$=$N%0%k!<%W$N%G%U%)%k%H$H$7$F;HMQ$7$^$9!#(B
 \fBquick\fP $B$r(B \fBhead\fP $B%k!<%k$H$H$b$K;HMQ$9$k>l9g!"(B
-$B%0%k!<%W=hM}$+$iLa$k$^$G$O!"%k!<%k=hM}$ODd;_$7$^$;$s!#(B
+$B$=$N%0%k!<%W$N=hM}$+$iLa$k$^$G$O!"%k!<%k=hM}$ODd;_$7$^$;$s!#(B
 .PP
 $B$"$k%k!<%k$O!"?75,%0%k!<%W$NF,$G$"$j$+$D!"(B
 $BHs%G%U%)%k%H%0%k!<%W$N%a%s%P$G$"$k$3$H$,2DG=$G$9(B
@@ -477,7 +479,7 @@
 .PP
 $B$3$l$O!":G=i$N%V%m%C%/$NA0$KCV$/I,MW$,$"$j$^$9!#(B
 le0/le1/lo0 $B$+$i$N$9$Y$F$NFb8~$-%Q%1%C%H$r=hM}$7!"(B
-$B%G%U%)%k%H$G$OFb8~$-$NA4%Q%1%C%H%"$r%V%m%C%/$9$k(B
+$B%G%U%)%k%H$G$OFb8~$-$NA4%Q%1%C%H$r%V%m%C%/$9$k(B
 $B?75,%0%k!<%W$r:n@.$9$k$K$O!"<!$N$h$&$K$7$^$9(B:
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 .nf
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 .fi
 .PP
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-$B%$%s%?%U%'!<%9L>$r;XDj$9$kI,MW$,$J$$$3$H$KCm0U$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(B
+$B%$%s%?%U%'!<%9L>$r:FEY;XDj$9$kI,MW$,$J$$$3$H$KCm0U$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(B
 $BF1MM$K!"<!$N$h$&$K(B TCP $B$J$I$N=hM}$rJ,2r$G$-$^$9(B:
 .LP
 .nf
