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> >    mdoc.7 $B$G$O1Q8l$N$^$^$G$9!#(B $B$3$l$O!"(B
> >     (1) mdoc.samples.7 $B$G$bLu$5$J$$(B
> >     (2) mdoc.7 $B$G$bLu$9(B
> >     (3) $B$=$NB>(B
> >    $B$N$$$:$l$,NI$$$G$7$g$&$+!)(B  $B8D?ME*$K$O!"1Q8l$N(B man $B%Z!<%8$r(B
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--- mdoc.samples.7.orig	Sat Nov 21 02:54:27 1998
+++ mdoc.samples.7	Mon Nov 23 07:43:27 1998
@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@
 .Ql \&.Fn fetch char\e *str
 .It Fn fetch "char *str"
 can also be created by
-.Ql \&.Fn fetch "\\*q*char *str\\*q"
+.Ql \&.Fn fetch "\\*qchar *str\\*q"
 .El
 .Pp
 If the
@@ -821,9 +821,9 @@
 .El
 .Pp
 It is an error to call
-.Li \&.Ad
+.Ql \&.Ad
 without arguments.
-.Li \&.Ad
+.Ql \&.Ad
 is callable by other macros and is parsed.
 .Ss Author Name
 The
@@ -854,7 +854,7 @@
 any arguments.
 .Ss Argument Macro
 The
-.Li \&.Ar
+.Ql \&.Ar
 argument macro may be used whenever
 a command line argument is referenced.
 .Pp
@@ -875,12 +875,12 @@
 .El
 .Pp
 If
-.Li \&.Ar
+.Ql \&.Ar
 is called without arguments
 .Ql Ar
 is assumed.
 The
-.Li \&.Ar
+.Ql \&.Ar
 macro is parsed and is callable.
 .Ss Configuration Declaration (section four only)
 The
@@ -1170,7 +1170,7 @@
 is to present the function type in kernel normal form for the
 .Sx SYNOPSIS
 of sections two and three
-(it causes a page break allowing the function name to appear
+(it causes a line break allowing the function name to appear
 on the next line).
 .Pp
 .Dl Usage: .Ft type ... \*(Pu
@@ -1558,7 +1558,7 @@
 macro usage at its worst.
 .Ss No\-Op or Normal Text Macro
 The macro
-.Li \&.No
+.Ql \&.No
 is
 a hack for words in a macro command line which should
 .Em not
@@ -1678,9 +1678,9 @@
 is parsed and is callable by other macros.
 .Ss Extended  Arguments
 The
-.Li \&.Xo
+.Ql \&.Xo
 and
-.Li \&.Xc
+.Ql \&.Xc
 macros allow one to extend an argument list
 on a macro boundary.
 Argument lists cannot
@@ -1995,12 +1995,14 @@
 sections may be added,
 for example, this section was set with:
 .Bd -literal -offset 14n
-\&.Sh PAGE LAYOUT MACROS
+\&.Sh PAGE STRUCTURE DOMAIN
 .Ed
 .Ss Paragraphs and Line Spacing.
 .Bl -tag -width 6n
 .It \&.Pp
-The \&.Pp paragraph command may
+The
+.Ql \&.Pp
+paragraph command may
 be used to specify a line space where necessary.
 The macro is not necessary after a
 .Ql \&.Sh
@@ -2141,7 +2143,7 @@
 .Ql \&.Ek
 (end-keep).
 The only option that
-.Ql \&.Bl
+.Ql \&.Bk
 accepts is
 .Fl words
 and is useful for preventing line breaks in the middle of options.
@@ -2526,7 +2528,7 @@
 \&.El
 .Ed
 .Pp
-Here is a hanged list with just one item:
+Here is a hanged list with two items:
 .Bl -hang -offset indent
 .It Em Hanged
 labels appear similar to tagged lists when the
